the nike gang

James, a six year old boy, with long curly blonde hair,more than anything wanted a red shiny Nike football, but his harsh mum angrily refused to buy him one.

8 thoughts on “the nike gang

    • Good Noun phrase :James a six year old boy with curly blonde hair
      Maybe a ing – clause eg: The boy,running in the hall way, was good at maths.

  1. Josh a excellent story opening but try to say why he wanted a Nike football.such as, He wanted these to join the Nike Football Gang.

  2. some speech mabey like his harsh angrie mum said “NO WE DO NOT HAVE ENOUGH MONEY!” but other than that it is realy good:)

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